Small P.p.

[Hannibal]

I give my penis a pull,
lightly to the left
and then straight out and away.
It's refusing to react,
and my mind moves on.
I take my hand out of my pants,
and write a letter to my dead grandmother.

[Fliptastic29]

I LOVE IT. The letter to the dead Grandmother was a must.

[sarafina mable]

i like this, no filler, straight to the point. in few words you were able to convey a really sad feeling through your body and mind.

[Hannibal]

Oddly enough - this poem was supposed to be funny... however - I didn't think - just typed, and this is what came out. My mood actually changed as I wrote it from "let's do something funny and wild" to..... serious.

[jemaeux]

warped.

says it all

[machinery]

i know the feeling exactly, except for the dead grandmother....the last line was a sad attempt for shock value though...

i think you could wrap up the piece with something better...